16-05-2024, 10:01 AM
I like the idea behind the promo - but the words are so clunky.
“Trust is about presence” < what does that even mean?
“About fostering relationships all around the world - for years.” < this sentence is so much longer than the previous one that it jars, no balance.
They needed a decent copywriter.
“Trust is about presence” < what does that even mean?
“About fostering relationships all around the world - for years.” < this sentence is so much longer than the previous one that it jars, no balance.
They needed a decent copywriter.
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